Tuesday, May 26, 2020
returning to school
hello everone today I am going share my first draft my writing is about how I was feeling going back to school. after lockdown my writing was not finsh but I am still happy with my writing what could I do to improve my writing?
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
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3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hello Nijesh I really like the way you you put full stops in the right place.Next time can you please go back and read it cause it kind of does not make sense. it did not make sense where you said my school uniform i came to than you started a new paragraph.
ReplyDeleteHello Nijesh.
ReplyDeleteIt's been great seeing your friendly smile in the mornings.
Just remember to use punctuation in your writing.It will make your work look neater and easier to read.
Hello Nijesh.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.
Hello Nijesh.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I can't wait to see what other work you have been doing in class.Have a great week.
Hello Nijesh.
ReplyDeleteJust a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog tonight.I look forward to seeing some more of the learning you have been doing in class soon.