Persuasion map

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In room 9 we have been working on persuasion maps. A persuasion map is where you have to write your opinion. I wrote 'students should wear their school unirforms'. After that we had to write down three main reason about what you wrote. Then we had to write down some examples or some facts from google. Here is my work that I have done.

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Persuasive writing

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In room 9 we have been doing persuasvise writing. We had to pick three sentence 3 different sentences and you had to write why you agree with it and you had to write your evidence.  Here is the three links to the sources( Link link Link) and here are my three 3 sentences .

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How to get a friend

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In room 9 for reading we are leaning about how to get friend. We had make a slideshow and write down facts about how to get a friend here what I have done.

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The Rainbow Fish

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In room 9 we have been reading about the Rainbow fish its a story about the rainbow fish does not want to share their scale. I created a slideshow about what happned in the rainbow fish book  here is what I have done.

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Resilence

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In room 9 we have been doing doing some resilence learning this is my writing how I can be resilence

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Narrative writing

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This Term we have been doing some Narrative template writing. We had to pick a storie that we know well  then we had to write it in a template on the template we had write beginning middle and end and problem and solution if you dont know whats a Narrative writing it a writing entertain the reader. Here is my Narrative template writing. 

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Term 3

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This term, I am looking forward that I am going to learn something new about reading and writing and  maths. And sports. And In the hoildays I played roblox with My friend Jherean.

Yellow spotted Lizard description

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We have been finding facts about the yellow spotted  lizard from the story Holes. We had to write the facts on our paper. Here is a picture of my yellow spotted  lizard work.

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How to write instructions

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welcome back to my blog 

I hope you guys have a nice day today. 

Todays blog is going to be about How to write instructions checklist. In room 9 we have been learning about procedure is set of instructions . 

Today I am going to show you my set of instructions, here is the slide. I hope you like it have a great day bye.

robbery story

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Today I'll be showing you my robbery writingt hat i have not finsh . we started writing this a week ago hope you enjoy my work first i have a question to ask you all which part did you enjoy?. 

It was dark night. I was walking back home from the fish and chips shop. I noticed a suspicious car next to the diary. One of the men in the car was wearing a light brown knitted ski mask. The other man had huge purple lips and the man was wearing a cyan hoodie because he did not have a mask so he put the hoodie on and pulled the string to cover he face up. 

I saw the two people coming out of the red small car. It looked like a mini cooper. The man with the cyan hoodie was holding a black medium bag when he came out of the car. The two men ran to the dairy. The man in the cyan hoodie rushed  forwards and banged into the door. I peeked into 

the window from the corner of the dairy and I saw the tall man pull out a silver pistol. The…

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Opening sentence for my story

Hello.

 We are learning to write an intersting first sentence to hook our reader.

 My first sentence  was:
"I was sitting on the couch focuse play on my xbox

This is my improved sentence.

"Pew pew pew pew pew throw a grenade"

give some feedback to improve my writing

returning to school

hello everone today I am going share my first draft my writing is about how I was feeling going back to school. after lockdown  my writing was not finsh but I am still happy with my writing what could I do to improve my writing?

music story starter

This is a story I wrote after I watched the music video Language.I chose this video because it is sad and I like watching sad stories.

One day there was a girl running in the forest because wolves were chasing her.The girl was nervous
and scared.

She reached the top of the cliff. She jumps off the cliff and into the sea.She was worried because
the ocean was deep. She swam in the cold sea. Then she went deeper down into the water. 

There were flashing lights.They were flashing different colours and the girl swam deeper into the
dark water. She was swimming deeper and it was getting darker and colder.

Then the girl fell out of the sky and landed on a large hand.The hand was on a see-through man.
She looked up and saw a man. The man put the girl on the ground and they go for a walk.

Then wolves are running on the icy mountains and follow the man and girl.The wolves bite
the see- through man and the see- through man falls down off the cliff. He falls into the sea.
The girl turns around and is brave. She chases the wolves away.

Cartoon 2.

this term we have been working on hour cartoon 2.