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Friday, August 23, 2019

music story starter


This is a story I wrote after I watched the music video Language.I chose this video because it is sad and I like watching sad stories.


One day there was a girl running in the forest because wolves were chasing her.The girl was nervous
and scared.


She reached the top of the cliff. She jumps off the cliff and into the sea.She was worried because
the ocean was deep. She swam in the cold sea. Then she went deeper down into the water. 


There were flashing lights.They were flashing different colours and the girl swam deeper into the
dark water. She was swimming deeper and it was getting darker and colder.

Then the girl fell out of the sky and landed on a large hand.The hand was on a see-through man.
She looked up and saw a man. The man put the girl on the ground and they go for a walk.

Then wolves are running on the icy mountains and follow the man and girl.The wolves bite
the see- through man and the see- through man falls down off the cliff. He falls into the sea.
The girl turns around and is brave. She chases the wolves away.

6 comments:

  1. Hello Nijesh. I thought your reason for choosing this video was interesting. I like that you had all the main events in your story.

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  2. Hello Nijesh. What a amazing story you wrote there. You must been busy doing that story! What I really love about your story is the picture. And also I love sad stories to! Have a great week Nijesh and see you later!

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    1. hi krystallynna thank you for looking at my blog

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    2. No promblom Nijesh. I did it because your my friend! Hope you have a fun fun fun day a school!!! Bye.

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  3. Hi Nijesh,
    Great short story, I like the way you use describing words to make your story interesting.
    Keep up the great work. :)
    Miss Frost

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    1. Hi Nijesh,
      I love your photo becaues it is cool. I like that you said one day there was a girl running in the forest. You can say one day a girl was running in the forest. How long did it take to do? :)
      -Ashleigh

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