this term we have been working on hour cartoon 2.
I am a Year 6 ākonga/student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My kaiko/teacher is Whaea Miki. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful, and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, August 2, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Nijesh.
ReplyDeleteYou have done another great cartoon. I can understand what your sentences would say if you added them to this page.
I know its hard, but maybe next time you could try and find a metal detector that has a transparent background.
Keep up the great work.
Hello,Nijesh I love your cartoon 2 it's amazing!
ReplyDeleteI love how you found the money.
And I like your person it's greater than mine!
Hey Nijesh I like your cartoon 2.I like that you put money in the ground and went to pick it up.I love that you put a background of the beach.Next time you could say makes a bepping noise.
ReplyDeleteyo its makaire from wigram school i lke your beach backround but not so much of your story that it was telling me next time just more detail later
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