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Today I'll be showing you my robbery writingt hat i have not finsh . we started writing this a week ago hope you enjoy my work first i have a question to ask you all which part did you enjoy?.
It was dark night. I was walking back home from the fish and chips shop. I noticed a suspicious car next to the diary. One of the men in the car was wearing a light brown knitted ski mask. The other man had huge purple lips and the man was wearing a cyan hoodie because he did not have a mask so he put the hoodie on and pulled the string to cover he face up.
I saw the two people coming out of the red small car. It looked like a mini cooper. The man with the cyan hoodie was holding a black medium bag when he came out of the car. The two men ran to the dairy. The man in the cyan hoodie rushed forwards and banged into the door. I peeked into
the window from the corner of the dairy and I saw the tall man pull out a silver pistol. The…
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WOW Nijesh...I am looking forward to reading your story once it's completed.
ReplyDeleteYou have done a great start at sequencing your recount and you have used some great describing words. WELL DONE!
Have a wonderful week and I look forward to playing Knuckle bones tomorrow...