We are learning to write an intersting first sentence to hook our reader.
My first sentence was:
"I was sitting on the couch focuse play on my xbox
"I was sitting on the couch focuse play on my xbox
This is my improved sentence.
"Pew pew pew pew pew throw a grenade"
give some feedback to improve my writing
Hello Nijesh.
ReplyDeleteI am not quite sure if you have completed the writing.Can you have a look at your work and see if it needs a bit of fixing?.