In room a 11 we have been drawing flowers i tryed to draw a sun flower this is my one that I drawed please tell me what could I do to improve my drawing ? have a great day.
Wednesday, October 14, 2020
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Hello Nijesh its me James. I really like your drawing it looked pretty good. It look like the sunflower that is up on the screen. The drawing looks like my drawing when I try draw with out tracing. See you again Nijesh bye
ReplyDeleteHello Nijesh.
ReplyDeleteI like the size of your flower head and that you have given it a stalk.
Maybe when you get time,you could add some detail to your picture and draw some petals and add some detail to the inside of the circle.I look forward to seeing it once you've completed it.
Hey Nijesh i think to improve your drawing extend the pedals out a bit more but yeah good job byeee
ReplyDeleteHey Nijesh i think you have done a amazing job but can you add some leaves
ReplyDeleteand some dot,s in side your flower. but good try i well see you at school and it is a 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁10 out of 5 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗.